Saturday, 18 August 2012

Jiyoung Kim Final FanFiction



KUNG FU PANDA FANFICTION : Po's Win

The Furious Five - Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane and the mighty Dragon Warrior Po, brought peace to the Valley of Peace. It has been many years since Tai Lung disappeared and hasn’t been seen. Everything seemed to go well for the Dragon Warrior Po until Shifu's messenger Zeng, the duck, flew in with unpleasant news... A new challenge for the Dragon Warrior.

Po untied the message on Zeng’s leg and slowly unrolled the message. His paws shook with worry. A new rival has appeared. His name was Ang. Also a panda bear like Po. The message wasn't long but had impact.

First of all, congratulations on becoming the Dragon Warrior. I have heard you have defeated Tai Lung and your Kung Fu skill is outstanding. The rumours say that you opened up a whole new generation of Kung Fu. Therefore it would be a great honour if I could have a chance to meet you in person, talk about the future of Kung Fu and if I may, a Kung Fu battle on the day of full moon, next month.

Of course Po knew about Ang, the master of many great warriors. He earned great respect from the people who defend Kung Fu against other martial art supporters. Po heard he was very passionate about Kung Fu and dedicates his life to it. Po sighed with great worry. How could he win Ang? Although he was the ‘GREAT DRAGON WARRIOR’… that was just a title. For the people of Valley of Peace he may be a hero, but he knew he was just a panda who fell out from the sky. New generation of Kung Fu? How could the words get twisted in such way? There is no new generation of Kung Fu. Po’s Kung Fu skills were basic survival skills like climbing trees to get the fruits for dessert after 30 bowls of noodles.

Shifu and Po went into a tough training. Although the training system involved Po’s ego to retrieve food, Shifu was happy with Po’s progress. He could see Po was getting better and better at Kung Fu. However at the back of Shifu’s mind, he was still worried for Po. He too had heard about Ang. Many of his childhood Kung Fu friends (now Kung Fu masters) brought up his name at reunions. Ang was truly acknowledged by his friends.
Time flew very fast and the day Ang is arriving came. As the sun rose behind the mountains, Zeng came flapping his wings.

“Ang is here! Ang is here!”

Po stood up from his chair and forced his legs to move. His legs felt heavier than ever. His bedroom door flung open and Shifu showed up.

“Master Shifu?”

“What are you still doing here? Aren’t you going to greet your own guest?”

“I was just on my way.”

“We have prepared a guest room down stairs next to the dining room and there will be a feast tonight for Ang. Now run!”

Po was pushed out of his room by Shifu. When Po was finally at the entrance of Kung Fu palace, Ang was already standing at the gate. The worn out cape around his shoulders showed how tough the journey was. Po slowly walked up to him and bowed with great respect.

“Welcome to the Valley of Peace. My name is Po. Let me take you to where you will be staying.”

Ang slowly took off his hat and his cape. Po couldn’t dare looking at him and kept his eyes on the ground.

“Thank you. My name is Ang and it is a great honour for me to actually meet you in person”

Po couldn’t believe his ears. The man who he had feared till today had a very soft lady’s voice. Ang knelt down to make eye contact with Po. Po hasn’t seen any Panda like Ang. His jaws dropped and his tongue fell out. Ang has the silkiest fur Po has ever seen. The pattern of her black and white fur was amazingly compelling. She had the finest body that a panda bear could ever have. The person Po has feared to battle with was female. Ang looked like she couldn’t even hurt a fly.

“YOU are Ang? But… you are a girl!”

Po finally managed to spit out some words. Ang didn’t look happy with his choice of words but seemed used to this kind of reaction from people.

“Yes, my name is Ang.”

Po got himself together and toured Ang around Kung Fu palace and to her guest room. Through the day she went on and on about Kung Fu but all Po heard was the beautiful melody of her voice and all his senses were shut down except his eyes. Even one blink seemed too long to take his eyes off her. He has fallen in love.

Many days passed since Ang arrived. Since her arrival Po’s love for Ang and grown so much. Po called Zeng and asked him to invite everyone of Valley of Peace to the battle. He planned to propose to Ang on the battle court.

The day of battle came. Everyone came to watch the battle between two great Kung Fu worriers. The two pandas got into their positions and bowed. Po looked around and raised his paw up gathering everyone’s attention.

“Before this match, I would like to ask Ang one question.”

“Will you marry me Ang?”

Ang looked very surprised. But she too had feeling growing inside her. She nodded.

“I will.”

Everyone in the audience was shocked but soon was cheering and congratulating Po and Ang.

There was no better day for Po.




Genre: comedy, romance, violence
My fan-fiction is on Kung Fu Panda is aimed at younger audience.
 Word Count: 943

Wednesday, 15 August 2012

Stacey's Five Fanfic Links

My Five Fan-Fic Links

FanFiction Link 1

In this Fan Fic, two characters from the Harry Potter series enter into a forbidden love. The Slytherin Prince falls in love with the Gryffindor Princess, a love no one would have thought would have happened.


This fanfic is derived from the Harry Potter series. Harry Potter is a series of seven fantasy novels which follow the adventures of Harry Potter and his two friends Ron Weasely and Hermione Granger, all of whom which are students at Hogwarts, School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The main story arc concerns Harry's quest to overcome the Dark wizard Lord Voldemort, whose aims are to become immortal, conquer the wizarding world, subjugate non-magical people, and destroy all those who stand in his way, especially Harry Potter.


Fan Fiction Link 2

This Fan Fic is based on one of the characters in a novel written by well-known author J. R. R. Tolkien, called The Hobbit. It is a fantasy novel and a children's book which is based on a character called Bilbo happens to stumble up on Gollum's precious belonging, the ring in which the Hobbit Bilbo had stumbled upon. From then on Gollum became of the important characters in the book.

I found this Fan fic interesting because usually people would focus on the main character, in this case it would be Bilbo Baggins the Hobbit from the Shire, but with this fan fic it focuses on a supporting character.

Fan Fic Link 3

This fan fic is based on 'Twilight' which is a series of four vampire-themed fantasy romance novels. The series covers the life of Isabella Swan a teenage girl who moves to Forks, Washington and falls in love with a 104-year old vampire by the name of Edward Cullen.

I chose this particular fan fic because it is different. In this fan fic 'Royce' who is usually the bad guy is now the good guy and works in the hospital. While working at the hospital he is present when an unknown patient is brought in. They run blood tests on her and according to the results the victims blood matches Royce, who is a vampire, and also Renee and Charlie, who are both Bella's parents. This adds a nice little twist to the story.

Fan Fiction Link 4
Rent is a Rock Musical which was based on Giacomo Puccini's opera La boheme. It is based on the lives of a group of impoverished young artists and musicians struggling to survive and create in New York's lower east side. 

This fan fic is derived from the musical, Rent. I chose this fan fic as I find it interesting that the writer chose to re-write a scene from the musical. It is a nice little scene involving the 'murder' of a 'family member' in which this case is a dog.


Fan Fiction Link 5
My fifth fan link is based on Save The Last Dance, a movie which was released in 2001 based on a dancer named Sarah, a promising dancer who is hoping to be admitted to study at Juilliard School. 

In this fan fic, the writer writes about a student named Sarah who is ballet dancer who notices that there is something terribly wrong with her friend. She then realizes that it is worse than she feared. One of her fellow students, Ellie, who is always being put down by another fellow student is struggling. Sarah knows that she has to do something to help her.

Thursday, 2 August 2012

Stacey's Fan Fiction Draft



http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8294384/1/Silver_Bullet

This is my first fan fiction link, by reading the first sentence you can tell that this is not a typical summary of a story where the good girl ends up with the good guy there are not a lot of twists but one big twist.

Harry Potter



" Summary: The whole school never thought it was possible for the Slytherin Prince to fall for the Gryffindor Princess, but it did. They fell in love deep. Hermione thought he had changed for the good, but she was wrong when she caught him snogging Pansy Parkinson. Hermione gave herself to him, and she felt betrayed when she caught him cheating on her. When she graduated, she cut all her contacts with him. 9 months later, she gave birth for their child, and she had no intentions on telling Draco about her. "


 When reading this I thought that it was stupid but then I read it again and I found it really interesting. If you compare this to typical stories where the good girl ends up with the good guy you won't find any similarities but instead find differences. The good girl ends up pregnant with the bad guy where as usually you would find in typical stories that the good girl ends up with the good guy and they get married and live happily ever after....

Wednesday, 1 August 2012

Sarah's fan fiction draft

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6703994/1/Monsterhttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/6703994/1/Monster


this being my first fan fiction that i have read i found from the very beginning that this story was going to be filled with a whole lot of twists and turns...and we are introduced to this from the very beginning


"These are the facts:
I am in my room
I am crying
I am trying not to listen
These are the myths:
My father loves me
My father doesn't hit my mom
My father is perfect
This is the truth:
He isn't a real father
He is a monster
He hates us"

just reading this small sequence you can just tell that this was going to be a crazy beginning to a weird journey...you can almost find similarities to our very own "once were warriors" in this story. from the abusive environment to the children some what finding a way to fend for themselves...after reading this i think i might take a new turn in my fan fiction readings and look at something a bit brighter.

Jiyoung Kim Fanfiction draft

Kung Fu Panda, the next story...


The Furious Five - Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane and the mighty Dragon Warrior Po, brought peace to the Valley of Peace.
It has been many years since Tai Lung disappeared and hasn’t been seen.

Everything seemed to go well for the Dragon Warrior Po until Shifu's messenger Zeng, the duck, flew in with an unpleasant news.. A new challenge for the Dragon Warrior.

Po untied the message on Zeng’s leg and slowly unrolled the message. He his paws shook with worry.

A new rival has appeared. His name was Ang. Also a panda bear like Po.

The message wasn't long but had impact.

---------------------
First of all, congratulations on becoming the Dragon Warrior. I have heard you have defeated Tai Lung and your Fung Fu skill is outstanding. The rumours say that you opened up a whole new generation of Kung Fu. Therefore it would be a great honour if I could have a chance to meet you in person, talk about the future of Kung Fu and if I may, a Kung Fu battle BLAH BLAH BLAH@#$%^

-          Invitation : Dragon Worrior of Valley of Peace.
I would like to invite you to a Kung Fu Battle on the day of full moon, next month.

BLAH BLAH@#$%^&*&^%$

Of course Po knew about Ang, the master of many great warriors. He







....
The END.

Wednesday, 25 July 2012

Lin's final fan fiction

As Edward moves swiftly through the forest as though gliding in ice, he notices shadows lurking beyond the trees to his sides. He's focused on getting to Bella as quickly as possible.
He promised her he wouldn't be late


The shadows get closer as though right behind him but he knows he can't stop. With the brushing sounds of the leaves and trees encompass the forest, Edward begins to hear whispering voice surrounding him.


He stops and faces the direction he was surging towards...
The forest seemed to anticipate his movement and stopped with him..

An awkward Silence…

Only the soft sound of the wind flowing through the forest...

"Who goes there?" Edward echoes.

He notices the shadows moving in a distance behind the deeper forest trees.

"What is your business with me?" he calls as he slowly steps forward, leaves crackling under his feet.

There is no reply and with the frustration of time against him to be with Bella, Edward he begins to grow impatient.

"Show yourself!" he exclaims.

Still... Nothing. Everything, just still...

Then, without warning , a beam of blinding light shot before Edward from the sky lifting the forest bed like a giant magnet would to paper clips. The grounds shakes and the trees start to bend as though a force from above were pushing them out of the way.
Hovering in mid-air over the beam, Edward notices a large dark circular saucer shaped craft with wings on either side that held a loud humming sound. A loud hissing sound as though coming from a large hydraulic mechanism boomed as a large platform dropped from the hovering craft. The light became bright as the crafts interior was begun to expose itself.
A voice from the inside of the craft ushered Edward towards the platform.

"Please.... We don't mean to startle you.... Step on to the platform".

Startled by the occurrence at hand, partly blinded and confused, Edward did what the voice asked. The protruding platform swallowed Edward into the large hovering craft. As it suddenly appeared, so too did it vanish with Edward in it leaving the forest as it were with the forest bed indented.

Back at the Cullen’s residents where Bella was residing waiting for Edwards return, Jacob and his 3 man clan sense a change in the wind.
Jacob runs to Bella to share with her the strange goings on he sensed.

"Something’s wrong Bella"

Bella, unbewildered by Jacob’s sudden approach, gasps and looks at Jacob for reassurance.

"It's seems as though he's fallen of the radar"

Bella looks around the room to find Alice staring blankly out the large glass window.

"I can't feel him either" she confirms

Bella stands up and is cupped by Jacob in comfort.
Jacob holds her firmly and reassures her that he is ok.
She struggles out of Jacobs hold as Jacob releases her and runs to Alice.

"Alice.....Why can't you see him Alice??......Alice!"

Alice reassures her as did Jacob.

"He's ok Bella, It's strange though. I can't see him at all. It seems he's gone behind some kind of force field that's blocking my visions, but he's ok Bella"

Bella cups her hands together locking her eyes outside the large glass window in hope that Alice and Jacob are right.

Back on the mysterious craft that Edward boarded, the blinding interior lights subdued and Edward regained his vision. As he looked around he noticed himself surrounded by a smorgasbord of very sophisticated flight control panels.

"Welcome to the 'Stark Enterprise'" a voice said from behind.

Startled, Edward spins around and was greeted with a man with his hand out. He looks at the man, then to his hand in distrust.

"Please, pardon my method of approach...... Time is not on our side my friend... Allow me to introduce myself... Billionaire, philanthropist, entrepreneur, most intelligent man in the world... Tony Stark.... Most know me as the 'Iron Man?" the man says with a big grin as steers into Edwards eyes.

Edward, still seemingly unsure of his surroundings and unsure of the man that stood before him reacts in defensively and without hesitation makes a lightening dash to the far side of the craft's interior to get a better view of his approacher.

"I can see why you chose him" another voice utters.

Edward looks to see a group of strangely dressed men looking down at him from a mezzanine floor.

Feeling a little vulnerable with his hand over his brow to get better view of the group Edwards asks,

"What do you want from me?"

"Lay it on him Stark" one of the men mutters from the upper mezzanine floor.

"Let me start off by saying, we're the good guys my friend, and we'd like for you and your group to join us, or at least form an alliance with us.... There is a darkness coming, like nothing the world has seen. Your special group have extraordinary skills that will help us in time of battle".

"How do I know you're 'the good guys?'" Edwards asked as he scanned the craft.

"We haven't ripped your head off have we?"

Edward grins and with a moment of consideration he agrees to form an alliance with Stark. "My family is waiting for me. I must return immediately"

No sooner did Edward request to leave did Starks ordered to open the platform.

As Edward was dismounted from the craft he turned to Stark with a sly grin and said,

"A Simple Knock at the door would suffice next time Mr Stark"

"He's known for his grand entrances" one of the other men says as Edward dismounts and turns to watch the craft ascend and vanish as quick as it appeared initially.

Edward carried on with his swift journey home to be greeted with a big hug from Bella.

"Sorry I'm late.... Let’s go inside.... I'll explain everything"

They both go inside to join Jacob and Alice who are eagerly awaiting to hear about Edwards Mysterious disappearance.