The Furious Five - Tigress, Monkey, Mantis, Viper, and Crane and the mighty Dragon Warrior Po, brought peace to the Valley of Peace.
It has been many years since Tai Lung disappeared and hasn’t been seen.
Everything seemed to go well for the Dragon Warrior Po until Shifu's messenger Zeng, the duck, flew in with an unpleasant news.. A new challenge for the Dragon Warrior.
Po untied the message on Zeng’s leg and slowly unrolled the message. He his paws shook with worry.
A new rival has appeared. His name was Ang. Also a panda bear like Po.
The message wasn't long but had impact.
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First of all, congratulations on becoming the
Dragon Warrior. I have heard you have defeated Tai Lung and your Fung Fu skill
is outstanding. The rumours say that you opened up a whole new generation of
Kung Fu. Therefore it would be a great honour if I could have a chance to meet
you in person, talk about the future of Kung Fu and if I may, a Kung Fu battle BLAH BLAH BLAH@#$%^
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Invitation : Dragon Worrior of
Valley of Peace.
I would like to invite you to a Kung Fu Battle on
the day of full moon, next month.
BLAH BLAH@#$%^&*&^%$
Of course Po knew about Ang, the master of many great warriors. He
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The END.
Great start! Grammar is good and you set the tone well, looking forward for more to come from this story :D
ReplyDeletesounds like a very interesting story,two panda bears in the battle.
ReplyDeleteThank you guys for the comments. My idea changed and the story kind of went off track to a romance story between Ang and Po. I tried to use short and simple sentences as I was aiming for younger audience (as the movie)
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