this being my first fan fiction that i have read i found from the very beginning that this story was going to be filled with a whole lot of twists and turns...and we are introduced to this from the very beginning
"These are the facts:
I am in my room
I am crying
I am trying not to listen
These are the myths:
My father loves me
My father doesn't hit my mom
My father is perfect
This is the truth:
He isn't a real father
He is a monster
He hates us"
just reading this small sequence you can just tell that this was going to be a crazy beginning to a weird journey...you can almost find similarities to our very own "once were warriors" in this story. from the abusive environment to the children some what finding a way to fend for themselves...after reading this i think i might take a new turn in my fan fiction readings and look at something a bit brighter.
This is your fan fiction draft. You will need to change the post heading. I will do it for you.
ReplyDeleteI like how you set the tone of the story using a small sequence, it's short and simple and still gets the point across. Good luck with the rest of your fanfic.
ReplyDeleteJust by reading your draft, I have already got attracted. Go ahead and look forward to read more.
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ReplyDeleteVery interesting draft Sarah. Definitely some twists and turns in there. Sounds like it's going to be an interesting draft :) cant wait to hear more!!
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